I like your idea
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Now please take this as nothing else but positive criticism:
The average attention span for longform content on youtube is much shorter than your intro.
You will boost your performance if you enhance the action within your first 3 seconds
Your video structure in the beginning is a little off I think:
Second 0 - 7: zoom on beehive
Second 7 - 14: beehive details
If you recognize this, your action starts in second 14. Cut that to second 1 or 2 by speeding up the beginning
Also I would recommend to work with text layovers every now and then to make people keep watching